A loose sentence sets the foremost idea prior to all additional information; in other words, it puts the main idea in the opening, letting the reader know what the sentence is essentially about within the first few words. A Loose Sentence must have a Basic Statement, followed by a string of details.
For Example:
Bells rang, filling the air with their clangor, startling pigeons into flight from every belfry, bringing people into the streets to hear the news.
Basic Statement: Bells rang
Details: filling the air with their clangor, startling pigeons into flight from every belfry, bringing people into the streets to hear the news.
Let's see YOUR Loose Sentence! (;
-Esteban